Did it occur to you that maybe this is how he talks. I had no problem whatsoever following it. You are essentially trying to Americanize or take out his mannerisms to suit your taste. Slow down? Ever hear Robins MMA commentary?Good stuff. What I learned working in radio and doing my own channel...turning around videos always takes longer than you think. And also, you sound like you're either rushing to get through the voiceover, or your train of thought is not with what you're talking about.
It can be hard to do at first, but slowing down, getting your head straight, and connecting with the part of yourself that has the enthusiasm for your topic, makes you sound way more interesting. Something to keep working on.
Except that I have a degree in broadcasting, anchored both the radio news and television news for my college network, and am an award-winning radio reporter and have a Youtube channel that I voice with a million views. So what I'm telling him is things you'll hear in professional journalism and voiceover work, and from experience. People who are intelligent, like Jack make great use of advice and feedback like that. People like yourself assume they "already know" and whine about "changing the way they do it." They tend to go nowhere.Did it occur to you that maybe this is how he talks. I had no problem whatsoever following it. You are essentially trying to Americanize or take out his mannerisms to suit your taste. Slow down? Ever hear Robins MMA commentary?
Except that I have a degree in broadcasting, anchored both the radio news and television news for my college network, and am an award-winning radio reporter and have a Youtube channel that I voice with a million views. So what I'm telling him is things you'll hear in professional journalism and voiceover work, and from experience. People who are intelligent, like Jack make great use of advice and feedback like that. People like yourself assume they "already know" and whine about "changing the way they do it." They tend to go nowhere.
Except....no one cares.