The Clamburglar
Burglin' is my game.
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yeah you pretty much nailed it, heres my cliffs if no ones read it.
his parents divorce early on his mother bends over backwards to give him what he wants, while his step mother doesn't put up with his shit and he feels victimized by it. I think this contributes to his feeling that the world should do the same, and when it doesn't he feels angry about it.
He has crazy social anxiety and feels others are constantly judging him. If he isn't talking to anyone at a party he feels like a loser etc. Because he doesn't have a girlfriend he feels like he is less valued by society. This is probably amplified by the amount he judges others, everything, from intelligence, looks, money and social standing is objectified into how it will benefit him to be around these people.
It is made worse by the fact he expects others to work around him, he feels slighted that girls only want brutish good looking jock guys, and his delusions of grandeur convince him that they should instead pursue him as he is a perfect gentlemen, rich and decendent of nobility. However he only ever values girls for their appearance. He even lashes out at one of his room mates after he brings home an ugly girl and smirks at him "like hes better than me".
He is ridiculously materialistic, along with judgemental and as he never properly bonds with anyone he never looks at anyones personality rather their features. he is convinced that being or appearing rich will make women want him. he tries to make his mother marry rich men that she doesn't like so he can be rich.
thats his biggest problem imo he is used to getting everything, so he isn't prepared to do anything to improve himself. he works 2 days his entire life because he feels the jobs he gets are beneath him, he wants to be rich so he buys lotto tickets, he wants to meet girls so he sits at book shops hoping a girl will come talk to him. he knows he has mental health issues and doesn't take his meds.
he is extremely jealous, and when other people have what he doesn't he manifests it with anger violent tendencies and child like tantrums. he is also full of contradictions he feels upset that his dad wasn't around enough because he was working, yet is angry that his dad isn't as successful at his job as he could be. he comes to the conclusion girls are flawed because they like "brutes" that bully him, yet he bullies and attacks people (not just the shooting), he physically assualts people at a party, and concludes they are savage animals when they defend themselves.
all in all he's a giant douchebag that gave the females and human race "one more chance" to redeem themselves and doesn't even talk to anyone. good ridance basically.
Also, his name was Elliot. Ouch.