No YOU havent formulated a proper argument, will give you a last chance to do it properly, you have failed at 1st base so far.
For an argument to hold water you have to:
- Define a finite set of premises that illustrate the line of reasoning for the argument. ...
- Gather evidence that will validate those premises. ...
- Acknowledge opposing arguments, while managing to refute them
Here's a simplified version you might find easier (hint, part 2 comes before 3)
- A point of view: This is the statement of what you believe.
- A reason for that point of view:This is why you feel that way.
- Proof to back up your reason:This is the evidence you use to drive your point home and make your argument real.