Yeah that's much better. Okay, here's some pointers. You got quick hands and decent pop, but those are things that are genetic. You could tighten up your form a whole lot and have blinding speed and accuracy, but to where it's meaningful and you don't get countered into oblivion.
When you throw the 1-2 combination on your cross your elbow is WAY high. Practice throwing the punch slowly and imagine your opponent feints to that side and counters you to the body, you're WIDE open for that. Plus you telegraph the uppercut ending to your combinatons. When you throw your hands out there you don't return to stance, rather you bring your hand all the way down to your waist and then throw the uppercut, and a good enough counter-puncher could tag you in there because your face is un-guarded. You have very little defensive movement but then again I don't know what specifically you were working on. What I would do is this:
Keep the tape of this routine for yourself.
Try the routine I posted in this forum in the thread entitled "Heavybag 101".
Watch both tapes and see if you notice a huge difference after working on the things I named in that thread.