My only real qualms are two-fold. When you go to your left hip, you're using too much legs. You don't go ALL THE WAY forward so that your back foot is kicked out behind you. You merely rotate the torso via the hips, then fold the left hip. What should happen is your right shoulder will go towards your left knee. The other thing is your hook, stop it at the impact point. Not beyond.
Ok thanks a lot!!!
Funny thing is when I first started doing it I didn't use any leg, I only turned my torso and folded my hip. Then I thought that was probably wrong, cause I didn't really feel weight on my lead leg. Then I started focusing on my hips but thought that must be wrong too. I think I finally understand how it should be done. I know you must be busy with your own things but If you don't mind again I will like to practice and then post another video.