Critique this hiphop music video

[MrShady]

Looking for some feedback on the video

thanks!

 

[Sage NorthGOAT]

Pretty cool. It fits the music in a strange way. Kept my attention

 

[Leonard Haid]

Extremely ambitious and original, but too surreal to have mass appeal among the target audience. Maybe make it flow better... get rid of 0:00 - 0:27, have it start at 0:28. That's when it starts to be really good. And think about a smooth segue at 2:11 to the next section rather than just stop it, pause, and suddenly go in another direction. I'd like to see some kind of transition which connects the two parts. Overall, I really liked it.

 

[jeskola]

Looking for some feedback on the video

thanks!

R.I.P. MF Doom

The story narrative was confusing, just seemed like random attacks and not sure what was happening at the end. Too many fast camera changes in the first minute. The dumpster throw effects were pretty poor and cheesy.

The part with the hanging lightbulbs was the best part.

Are you Jawed J.S.?

 

[Sir Elzio Dennick]

Not too impressed, all that kind of stuff tries way.too hard.