I'm not a certified trainer or a pro fighter but I'd be glad to give my opinion. I have trained and sparred in boxing for years as a hobbyist and if you were one of my friends in the gym my advice would be:
Things I don't like
- Stance is a bit wide, which can actually make it harder to move effectively and cause you to lunge.
- Instead of moving straight back after an attack, pivot out to one side or the other (like you did at .35 seconds, and your opponent had nothing there to counter). Make your opponent have to constantly reset. At .14 seconds you got caught for staying in too long.
- I usually don't like keeping the left hand dropped so low but it's a style thing and a lot of guys use it to bait their opponent. Just be careful of getting timed and keep your chin tucked in.
- Move your head more.
- Don't cross your feet. If you move right, right foot goes first. If you're moving left, left foot goes first. (Ideally)
Like
@nastyleft said, you're rangy and ODLH would be someone I'd tell you to watch as well. Body type and stance are similar, but he's right that you wanna develop your own style. You definitely have the makings of someone who could be impressive if they tighten up their technical game. Props for putting yourself out there and asking for critiques.