Okay, I can see a couple of things here, but the clip is kinda short, and the view not ideal, but here it goes.
- Your head movement needs work. It's fine when you're in defence, but when you're attacking yourself a lot of times you don't move at all. Try to drill combo's and adding head movement at the end.
- You fight well going forward, but when your opponement is pushing you back you struggle, esspecially defensively. Practise your footwork, pivots and escapes when somebody presses you.
- I like the southpaw style, your straight left seems quick and snappy. You can help yourself a bit by working on foot placement (keep your front foot outside of his)
- Work on keeping your hands up during combinations a bit more. His counters almost exclusively hit when you're trying to land a combo and forget to get your non-punching hand up.
- Like the guy before me said, more feint. You almost exclusively punch. Ue feints to draw out his counters a bit more.
Overal I see someone who can box a bit, but needs some work round the edges. How long have you been training?