Started on some kickboxing writing and looking for some people to critique an article

Discussion in 'Muay Thai and Kickboxing' started by hughmma, Jan 7, 2015.

  1. hughmma

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    http://purecombat.wordpress.com/2015/01/08/in-2015-its-make-or-break-for-glory-world-series/

    Basically I threw together a small piece that essentially served as a year in review for GLORY and looks to the year ahead in regards to the trouble they've seemingly been facing as of late. I've been writing a little but more frequently lately and hosting some pieces on wordpress in the interest of having a platform to receive criticism so anyone with a few minutes I would greatly appreciate it if you would take a read and tell me what I should be doing better.

    Also, due to my own stupidity this was posted before I went through and made some final changes, so bare with me if there is a few mistakes, It was supposed to save as a draft.

    Thanks in advance!
     

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