So I wrote some poetry....

[Dan O]

Just start a new YouTube channel under a different name

That was the first thing I tried but apparently you have to set up a new email first. There has to be an easier way

 

[Dan O]

I was kidding because of what you said, lighten up.

Try avoiding making inflammatory statements to initiate conversation and you’ll find that people “lighten up” much easier

 

[Fedorgasm]

That was the first thing I tried but apparently you have to set up a new email first. There has to be an easier way

Yeah I hear you man, took human civilization thousands of years to set up the first email.

 

[Fugazy]

Try avoiding making inflammatory statements to initiate conversation and you’ll find that people “lighten up” much easier

Bruh I made a direct play on the joke you made about yourself…

And I then offered the exact advice you were looking for.

U trippin

 

[Dan O]

Yeah I hear you man, took human civilization thousands of years to set up the first email.

Bruh I made a direct play on the joke you made about yourself…

And I then offered the exact advice you were looking for.

U trippin

Thanks fellas, I appreciate the input.

 

[HARRISON_3]

Is that from boogie nights?? I’m not sure if that was meant as an insult but that’s a damn good movie

Damn right it's from Boogie Nights

 

[Dan O]

Damn right it's from Boogie Nights

I think it was John C. Riley’s best serious piece. I’d say the aviator but he didn’t get the screen time he got in boogie. He goes under appreciated a lot. The guys got real range.
I still need to watch brothers sisters I think it’s called?

 

[Fugazy]

Thanks fellas, I appreciate the input.

I bet your poetry is trash anyways.

 

[HARRISON_3]

I think it was John C. Riley’s best serious piece. I’d say the aviator but he didn’t get the screen time he got in boogie. He goes under appreciated a lot. The guys got real range.
I still need to watch brothers sisters I think it’s called?

Shoot, The Perfect Storm, The Promotion, Gangs of New York, Magnolia.

He's definitely got great range.

Hard to believe he's also Dr. Bruhl.

No joke.

 

[Fugazy]

Appreciate that

 

[Dan O]

I bet your poetry is trash anyways.

Honestly, it probably is. I was just excited to try it.

 

[Dan O]

Shoot, The Perfect Storm, The Promotion, Gangs of New York, Magnolia.

He's definitely got great range.

Hard to believe he's also Dr. Bruhl.

No joke.

How did I forgot Gangs. Geeze he should have more awards than he does

 

[Dan O]

I bet your poetry is trash anyways.

Do you have any you’d recommend reading so that I can get better at it? I’m still very much learning!

 

[Travis Alexander]

Came to read poetry, leaving disappointed TS.

 

[Dan O]

Came to read poetry, leaving disappointed TS.

Apologies if it’s awful

 

[Dan O]

Check the stalls in the bathroom at your local truck stop.

Is that the go-to spot for modern writers??

 

[Travis Alexander]

Apologies if it’s awful

I actually loved it, thank you for sharing Sherbro! I listened to all three chapters you are quite eloquent and I felt the depth. I don’t know much about poetry but I thoroughly enjoyed yours.

 

[Dan O]

I actually loved it, thank you for sharing Sherbro! I listened to all three chapters you are quite eloquent and I felt the depth. I don’t know much about poetry but I thoroughly enjoyed yours.

Thank you so very much! The kind words mean so much.

Do you mind if I ask what message you took away from it? Everyone’s that heard it so far has given me so much helpful feedback!

 

[Cup Noodle]

Apologies if it’s awful

I don’t like your voice.


Appreciate the apology

 

[Cup Noodle]

@Dan O
Serious feedback here fellow Sherbro.
Your voice is nasally and off putting. Not trying to be mean, just honest.

Have you considered getting a hot chick to read your material?