I wrote a short story, tell me what you think

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  1. Clippy Do I amaze you?

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    Four foot tall Timmy set out to embark on the great adventure he had been anticipating for many years! But it was really windy so he went back inside.
     
  2. Horse Style Gold Belt

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    Timmy wanted to get some oatmeal cookies to go with his orange juice but his whore mother put the cookie jar on the top shelf so Timmy cried himself to sleep.
     
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    Looking forward to the porn parody of that tale. <mma4>

    four foot long timmy.
     
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    Once inside Timmy's uncle came to visit and Timmy got molested.

    Curse you mother nature!
     
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    Cookies with orange juice? That’s fucked. Horror story right here.
     
  9. Cash Bill 52 Brown Belt

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    He was stopped by the wind...

    In a classic hero’s journey the hero refuses the call to adventure at first.

    The wind will die down is my prediction.
     
  10. The Witcher відродитися

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    Timmy, afraid of the unknown and vastness outside, turned around shamefully; this was the third time this week. The door gently clicks shut and Timmy, head down, shuffles his way into the safety of the ruined house he called a home.

    It wasn't his fault he was like this but he had decided as a child, 'its just the way things are'. His stature matched his bravery and his insecurity matched the unknown outside; two parallel machines of war that ruled his mind and shaped his world.
     
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  11. Clippy Do I amaze you?

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    I wrote a sequel:

    The winds died down and vertically impaired Timmy set out once again to attempt his long dreamed of adventure with more anticipation and determination than ever! It rained really hard so he didn't go.
     
  12. Clippy Do I amaze you?

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  13. Clippy Do I amaze you?

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    @The Witcher if you were really fast you may have caught me accidentally posting the Daniel Cormier two belt gif instead of the BJ Penn nod gif. I wanted to be sure you saw the final draft of my originally intended post.
     
  14. The Witcher відродитися

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    I saws it

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  15. yamahacrasher Blue Belt

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    @Clippy This is great and all, but when are we getting the rest of your Infinity War re-write?
     
  16. Clippy Do I amaze you?

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    Oh deer don't hold your breath on that one :p
     
  17. Michaelangelo Okay USA Platinum Member

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    poor Timmy is gonna grow up to be a manlet
     
  18. Krixes The Undefeated Gaul Platinum Member

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    Has serious potential, I'm waiting eagerly for part 2 when it's not so windy outside.
     
  19. Clippy Do I amaze you?

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    Read through I already posted the sequel

    Am working on the third installment to complete the trilogy
     
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    Voice of a generation imo
     

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