Chael's poem after Okami got cut....

[supark]

....will sound like this:

Dana, Dana what did you do?
You cut my boy Okami out of the blue?
Why? Cause he has a boring style?
Releasing Yushin is just vile.
I checked his record just last week:
Didn't he just have a 3 fight winning streak?
He is a master of the wrestlef*ck,
not quite exciting like Chuck,
But let's be honest, D,
Yushin fights just like me.
If he would start talking a lot of trash,
you would admit he made you a lot of cash.

Yours truly,

Chael.

 

[ArinBerk]

A for effort ?

 

[OliverAtom]

8.5/10. Not bad

 

[Thai Domi]

Well done.

 

[maksy]

 

[MMAaddictus]

Kinda liked it.

 

[AssWhoopin]

Not bad and much better then I would do.....

 

[SoccerMom]

Well - your rhythm is rotten, and yet, nonetheless
When you ask if I like it, the answer is Yes.

 

[surf fu]

Didn't laugh.

AdamHunter, that you? :redface:

 

[JudontknowMMA]

As good as it can be. He's gotta silently stick up for his boy, had to make it seem less genuine to keep in the good graces obviously.

 

[wowspare]

Better than expected...

 

[sethcab]

 

[Hanri]

good job

 

[Face Stab]

For a white belt thread,
I'm not gonna lie.
More inspired than most,
But your rhymes gotta die.


Poetry son... not your thing.

 

[Satanical Eve]

 

[Hanoi Rox]

The meter of that poem sucks.

 

[Cnez]

Stick to just replying to other posts buddy

 

[nobre arte]

i liked

 

[Oleg Salenko]

Well - your rhythm is rotten, and yet, nonetheless
When you ask if I like it, the answer is Yes.

Now THAT'S more like it.

 

[styopa]

Good job TS.