Chael's poem after Okami got cut....

Discussion in 'UFC Discussion' started by supark, Sep 29, 2013.

  1. supark

    supark Guest

    ....will sound like this:

    Dana, Dana what did you do?
    You cut my boy Okami out of the blue?
    Why? Cause he has a boring style?
    Releasing Yushin is just vile.
    I checked his record just last week:
    Didn't he just have a 3 fight winning streak?
    He is a master of the wrestlef*ck,
    not quite exciting like Chuck,
    But let's be honest, D,
    Yushin fights just like me.
    If he would start talking a lot of trash,
    you would admit he made you a lot of cash.

    Yours truly,

    Chael.
     
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    A for effort ?
     
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    Kinda liked it.
     
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    Not bad and much better then I would do.....
     
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    As good as it can be. He's gotta silently stick up for his boy, had to make it seem less genuine to keep in the good graces obviously.
     
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    Better than expected...
     
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    good job
     
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    For a white belt thread,
    I'm not gonna lie.
    More inspired than most,
    But your rhymes gotta die.


    Poetry son... not your thing.
     
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    The meter of that poem sucks.
     
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    Stick to just replying to other posts buddy
     
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    Now THAT'S more like it.
     
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    Good job TS.
     

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